There are some points which may be wrong. Just watched the vid and the others are right, brake pedal travel is excessive. I'm not 100% sure but the spline and dot thing on the pedal don't seem to line up, may be one spline out. However even aligning them won't make any difference as all it would do would be to move the brake arm forward but won't move the brake pedal up. However moving the brake arm forward would reduce the amount of travel in the brake action.
The brake pedal adjusting bolt is interesting, in the manual it shows the bolt being fitted the other way, the head is uppermost with the end of the bolt touching the brake pedal, the locknut is against the frame lug. In the parts book it shows it the way you have it. Not sure if that would raise the pedal up a bit, it's mainly there so you can position the pedal to suit your riding position.
SohRons pic doesn't even show the adjusting bolt, unless his bolt is black and is lost against the frame black. That would raise his brake pedal up to it's maximum position which would be misleading. Or maybe the pic isn't clear enough but considering how clean his build is I'd have expected a new bolt which should show against the black frame.