Ok, after un-double-crossing my eyes twice, everything looks fine. Your choice of color schemes made the whole thing a bit of a challenge when I’m very accustomed to Honda colors. But that is fine.
The ONLY thing that gives me any pause… you ran from the Reg/Rec the sensing wire into to LOCK. That does work, it’s just not where I would tap for battery performance. Normally, I use one of the AUX ports to feed the REG side as it provides a slightly better assessment of the draw on the battery on the “use side” versus the “feed side”. But again, no big deal, you’ll be fine.
Bear in mind, any Li battery will not have the nuts to sustain testing and wiring and troubleshooting. Use a donor battery until you’ve got everything sorted, then replace with the Li battery. You’ll drain that pretty quickly and could potentially damage it.
Let us know how it goes from here-