Yes, I see.. how rights could be taken away from the common man from the vague wording.
But... I think the point of this "security act" is to protect anything having to do with government only. It does need a re-write, but sometimes you just have to read between the lines. I don't think anything between the lines in this particular item, should lead us to believe that they are trying to take over the internet. Suggest your rewrites and move on.