Bankerdanny You photo looks pretty good. What concentration of The Works? Did you mix it with water in the tank or outside the tank. How long did you leave it? Was there a lot of gas produced?
I did two treatments because the scale and varnish in my tank was heavy after 30 years of sitting 2/3 full of gas. I used it straight for the first round, then mixed the second bottle with a gallon or so of water.
It does produce fumes (visible fumes actually). I emptied the bottle inside, added 2 one foot lengths of a medium size chain, put the cap on, shook it around for a minute or so, then let it sit for about 10 minutes before emtying the liquid and flushing with water.
The second treatment I cut the cleaner with about 1 a gallon of water. But if the rust in light in your tank, you could most likely use the dilluted solution vs the straight cleaner. But I don't think it makes a difference which way you go.
After the second treatment I rinsed the tank with half a box of baking soda and a couple gallons of water.