Don't give up Terry, your poetry is sensitive and moving. This one is especially good..
Haiku #18
The muted howl of HM300's
Warm wind in my hair,pure pleasure
Wish my jacket wasn't so tight
Just a couple of technical details - 1. cheese has one syllable, mel-on has two, cu-cum-ber has three etc. 2. brush up on your counting 1-7 Remember 5-7-5