Connect the red key-switch wire to the left side of the main fuse.
Connect the black key-switch wire to the left side of the (redundant) ignition fuse.
Connect the left side of the light fuse directly to the left side of the ignition fuse.
Leave the brown/brown-white switch wires unconnected. (If you want to use the parking light the way it was designed, it adds a fair amount of complexity to the wiring.)
The green wire from the regulator, as well as the green wire from the alternator field coil, need to be grounded to the frame, not just connected to each other.
The way your headlight switch is wired is incorrect; the wire from the fuse needs to be connected to the center terminal, and the high and low beam wires to the outside terminals. The terminals on a toggle switch are opposite of the lever; when the lever is up, it turns on the lower terminal, and when the lever is down, it turns on the upper terminal.
Move the start button wire from the left side of the main fuse to the left side of the ignition fuse; the way it is now, the starter can be operated even with the key off.
I think that's all....